The Days

ThedaysbeginnerA buckram wind pushes at the scapulae, the sacrum, an absolute propulsive force even as it deftly infiltrates parka weft, fanning along sweater warp to flick deliciously at gooseflesh skin.  So driven to celerity, their footfalls crunch blithely on a gravel trail studded with titian speckled leaves and golden fir needles, their hushed voices sequestered by the earthy amber folioles of ferns amidst matted beryl moss and kaleidoscopic lichen below, by the piquant fare of russet and salmon and burgundy and saffron and lemon leaves above.  Beyond the bowing river birch break at lakes edge the water furrows and caps in gamboling thrill, a webbed goulash of cobalt, azure, copper and silver, reflecting the plum on peach on lilac of sunrise.

A swell of foamed iridescence laps at the eroding path at their feet and she stops abruptly, reaches for her husband’s hand, a practiced, sure gesture reciprocated in symmetry.  There they stand together, erect, sturdy, towering ahead of us on the narrow track as the sun continues it’s silent ascent.

Quietly we wend towards them, as much immersed in our own reverences as giving nod to their shared meditation.  We halt a short distance from their orison and invoke our own, I too gripping my husband’s snug hale hand, allowing the detail and the essence to wash over me, the wind tugging at my hood.  We stand a comfortably long while.

And I am rich for this scene, this place of singular beauty in all weather, for this season, that of exquisite decay and alluring, growing tumult, for this time, hours from bother and burnout, for this man, the intimacy and mirth and passion and crooked smug smiles.  Steeped in a complex calm I marvel at such spartan opulence.

“Oh my goodness, are we in your way, dears?!”

The sudden voice is small, breathy, wavering in the whiz-trill of the wind trapped in my hood.  I about face to determine its issue but see only the polychromic tunnel from whence we’ve come.

“Just one moment, we’ll get to the side.”

A deeper, tottery tone rings out.  I turn back towards that hearty couple ahead and am startled to mark instead two stooped, unsubstantial figures clinging to one another, scuffling falteringly toward the wood.  I squint into lambent shadows, perplexed.  Where are the fleet, the sure-footed pair?! The length of my cogitation exceeds that socially acceptable and I am on some level quite thankful when my husband, unfazed and jolly, at once cheerily thanking and apologizing to them, tows me past the pair.

The old man, the bend in his waist speaking a stenotic spine, has slipped a withered arm about his wife’s kyphotic back, the other gently supporting her forearm.  Standing head and shoulders shorter than he, frail beneath a heavy parka and cabled sweater, she steadies herself with delicately clawed hand against a knurled maple. Her keenly blue eyes glow, auroral in their rugose, edentulous seat, seeking mine as we pass.

On finding them her thin lips arc into a striking smile, twirling through bemusement to stir like reply.

“This place makes you feel young,” comes the breathy small voice once more.  Her familiar gaze holds mine until we reach the rocks and passage requires a different kind of forward sight.  As we begin our climb, jocund wind at our backs, a warm voice carries smooth and strong, supple, young when it reaches my ear.

“Enjoy the days.”


#Acadia  #Fall  #YoungAtHeart

About Gold Standard Test

Sometimes I work, and sometimes I play. Sometimes I eat, sometimes I've no time. Sometimes I know, most times I'm learning. Sometimes I laugh, at times it's through tears. Sometimes I love, amidst trying and tolerating. I strive to make a mark, but this worlds substance can be hard. And all the while, I do hope it's normal and extraordinary and, above all, enough.


  1. This is lovely. Captures the nuances of fall and nature and our desire to be among it.

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    • What a lovely comment! It was so very lovely that day I’m afraid I’ll never really capture it, afraid I’ll forget the best bits of it; good thing this season is an annual event! And you’re so right – there is something about autumn that stokes the desire to be out in it – something weirdly primal… Thanks much for reading and stopping to comment.

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  2. I love your phrases and imagery! “buckram wind, gesture reciprocated in symmetry, exquisite decay, waist speaking…” If I were still teaching, I would surely use them as examples for writing class!

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  3. I love this. It captures the beauty of so fleeting a moment as a chance meeting in so beautiful and colorful way.

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  4. I love your writing! I’m going to be doing NaNoWriMo this year so I might post some of my writing myself but I can’t write nearly as well as you can. 🙂

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  5. Glad to discover your writing after your visit to my blog. What a rich and layered piece! I appreciate how you seamlessly integrate medical terminology like “stenotic” and “kyphotic” into your descriptive writing . . .

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    • I was so glad to discover your story through a fellow blogger! Theater professorship to medical school?! Color me fascinated! Non-traditional students are the best. (Says a proud former non-traditional student). Thanks for stopping on by and leaving such kind (and clinical) comment. 😉

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      • Yes! Great to be connected with someone else who also went through a non-traditional path to medicine (The best, I agree:) . . . I can’t tell you how rewarding it’s been to bring a theatrical/humanities lens to my medical studies and patient interactions, so I appreciate your words. I have just given myself a prescription for more of your literary work, PRN. The prognosis for my soul is good;)

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      • Excellent assessment and plan. I concur on all points. I think we can plan on discharge to home in the morning with close follow up. 😉

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  6. First, thanks for finding me so I could find you 😉 Second, I see Acadia – are you in Maine? That’s where I wrote my poem “Waiting.” Thirdly, I followed every word of this lovely piece, and wondered who would have a similar vocabulary! Then I went to your About page … ah, yes. It all makes sense 😉 Early in my life, I was on a medical track. In retrospect, stepping off that path was a good move. Cheers!


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